intresting.... her shadow is good, and i like the moon or astroid thing out the window really reminds you its in space. the lines could be steadier.

thankyou

Ok, perspective first. The horison line is WAY too high, and not consistant at all. this makes yr chickens, person and coup all apper to be on different planes, and very disjointed. I really can't tell if yr person is male or female- and in any case the hands, shoulders and head are all far too small for someone with such long legs. You need more shadows in general, and yr coup, persona, and the walls- the ones you do have aren't really consistant with a single light sorce.

ohn the do like- green chickens in space=funny. good coustume design, and yr chickens actually look pretty good for tecnical drawing standpoint.

keep it up.

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J. Leigh
Rocking the Boat would not be such a problem if everyone in it knew how to swim.......

Thats so cool! I love the perspective in this! It looks really surreal-ish..

Speaking of chickens, I still owe you that chicken trade dont I? (Im a terrible person) <:[

thanks

and your not a terrible person!

OHYESIAM

I'll get to your drawing as soon all these exams end. <3

NO YOUR NOT

yay!